Here is a poem I wrote a while ago. Let me know what you think. I don’t write much poetry. 🙂
Stifling my spirit
Broken, and chained, coming loose
When will my heart be wholly unified with His own?
His sweet Spirit here
Weak and wounded, yet, am able
Carried on by the strength of His Word and His presence.
He will take you there
Trust Him and rest in His greatness
Open your life and your soul to His great benevolence!
What do you think? Did you catch the pattern? Did you understand it? Was it good? I wrote a tune for it to be sung to as well, but it isn’t what I want. If any of you would like to try and set it to music that would be cool. 😉